tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8426723056163837913.post7617750724512243158..comments2023-08-27T02:56:53.756-06:00Comments on Frost Cave: Full "Drums of Desolation" Chapter/ Pre-Order ReminderChris Heimerdingerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02000418124642779132noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8426723056163837913.post-37958662974814830002014-08-10T20:19:35.278-06:002014-08-10T20:19:35.278-06:00Pre-ordered and excited!Pre-ordered and excited!Jimmyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10638467663493775117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8426723056163837913.post-18300079316915845992014-07-31T14:41:05.857-06:002014-07-31T14:41:05.857-06:00That chapter was excellent, Chris! Much better tha...That chapter was excellent, Chris! Much better than the rough draft. I found only one thing you might want to fix. In the paragraph that begins with “I almost defied her,” the sentence "God was in control" should be "God is in control" to keep the tense straight. Can't wait for Chapter 2!James G. Stokeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13331619300918542708noreply@blogger.com